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The charts below show degrees granted in different fields at the National University in the years 1990, 2000, 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show degrees granted in different fields at the National University in the years 1990, 2000, 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The three pie charts illustrate how many degrees granted are divided between four sciences at the National university
depended
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 on the year. Pay attention that only computer science
are
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 showing
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a gradually
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gradually
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 rise from 1990 to 2010 years.
Further more
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, if in nineteen ninety it divided the first place in volume 30 pre
cent
 with the Business, in
2000s
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the 2000s
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 it reached forty per
cent
 and in two thousand ten had already kept just under one half of all volume.
Meanwhile
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the
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Medicine and
the
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Law fluctuated in
the
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similar bounders. But if the Law decreased its figures
on
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 5 per
cent
 to two
thousands
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 and
then
 recovered to fifteen. The medicine first grew up close to
one third
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 and
then
 it fell back to
one quarter
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.
And the
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The
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 Business science
at
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in
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 the same period had
the
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a
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plummet
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 trend and changed the
leader
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 position in 1990 to the
last
 place in two thousand ten with the patterns 30 per
cent
 and fifteen respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "divided" was used 2 times.
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