The charts below show degrees granted in different fields at the National University in the years 1990, 2000, 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The three pie charts illustrate how many degrees granted are divided between four sciences at the National university

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on the year. Pay attention that only computer science

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showing

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gradually

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rise from 1990 to 2010 years.

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, if in nineteen ninety it divided the first place in volume 30 pre

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with the Business, in

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it reached forty per

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and in two thousand ten had already kept just under one half of all volume.

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Medicine and

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similar bounders. But if the Law decreased its figures

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recovered to fifteen. The medicine first grew up close to

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it fell back to

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Business science

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the same period had

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trend and changed the

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position in 1990 to the

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place in two thousand ten with the patterns 30 per

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and fifteen respectively.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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161 words

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