The charts below show degrees granted in different fields at the National University in the years 1990, 2000, 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show degrees granted in different fields at the National University in the years 1990, 2000, 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below show degrees granted in different fields at the National University in the years 1990, 2000, 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The three pie charts illustrate how many degrees granted are divided between four sciences at the National university
depended
Wrong verb form
depending

It appears that your sentence or clause uses an incorrect form of the verb depended. Consider changing it.

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on the year. Pay attention that only computer science
are
Correct subject-verb agreement
is

It seems that the verb are does not agree with the subject. Consider changing the verb form.

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showing
Correct article usage
a gradually

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gradually
Change the word
gradual

Gradually seems to be the wrong part of speech for this context.

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rise from 1990 to 2010 years.
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Further more
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Furthermore

The word Further more seems to be miswritten. Consider replacing it.

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, if in nineteen ninety it divided the first place in volume 30 pre
cent
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with the Business, in
2000s
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the 2000s

It appears that the article usage before 2000s is incorrect. Consider making a change.

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it reached forty per
cent
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

and in two thousand ten had already kept just under one half of all volume.
Meanwhile
Add a comma
Meanwhile,

It appears that you are missing a comma after the introductory phrase Meanwhile. Consider adding a comma.

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the
Correct article usage
apply

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Medicine and
the
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apply

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Law fluctuated in
the
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apply

It seems that there is an article usage problem here.

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similar bounders. But if the Law decreased its figures
on
Change preposition
by

It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.

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5 per
cent
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

to two
thousands
Change to singular
thousand

It appears that the number thousands is modifying a noun and should be in the singular form. Consider changing it.

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and
then
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recovered to fifteen. The medicine first grew up close to
one third
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one-third

It seems that one third is missing a hyphen. Consider adding the hyphen(s).

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and
then
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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

it fell back to
one quarter
Add a hyphen
one-quarter

It seems that one quarter is missing a hyphen. Consider adding the hyphen(s).

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.
And the
Correct word choice
The

It seems that conjunction use may be incorrect here.

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Business science
at
Change preposition
in

It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.

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the same period had
the
Correct article usage
a

It seems that there is an article usage problem here.

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plummet
Replace the word
plummeting

The word plummet doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

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trend and changed the
leader
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leading

The word leader doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

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position in 1990 to the
last
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

place in two thousand ten with the patterns 30 per
cent
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

and fifteen respectively.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "divided" was used 2 times.
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