You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope. Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter: explain why you are writing express concern about the missing card ask them what they intend to do
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing a request about
an
issuance of Correct article usage
the
new
debit Correct article usage
a new
card
from your branch.
Since
I applied for one week of Correct word choice
apply
new
ATM Correct article usage
a new
card
through online
form and I received Add an article
an online
the online
today
. The Correct pronoun usage
it today
letter
I am sending to you because
I Add a missing verb
is because
didn't
Verb problem
haven't
Rephrase
yet receive
receive
my new Wrong verb form
received
card
still
. Rephrase
apply
Although
, I have to mentioned
that I received your Change the form of the verb
mention
letter
. But unfortunately, my card
was not with your acknowledgement letter
. Besides
this
, the card
was not being attached by
mistakenly Change preposition
apply
from
your dispatcher.
Change preposition
to
However
, it is my deep concern that where
it is gone because the envelope had remained merely a Rephrase
apply
letter
. Although
, is Correct word choice
However
an
important to check Change the article
apply
enclosure
before sending Correct article usage
the enclosure
letter
to your clients so the mistakes Add an article
a letter
could
not happen again. You can ask Verb problem
do
from
your employee Change preposition
apply
that
he may Correct word choice
if
be
Verb problem
have
forgot
to attach the Wrong verb form
forgotten
card
with letter
.
I am requesting to please send my bank Correct article usage
the letter
card
as soon as possible because my payments are stopped due to
ATM
Correct pronoun usage
my ATM
card
. Furthermore
, the charges of
my Change preposition
on
card
will not deduct
again because it is missed by your dispatcher.
I am looking forward to hearing from you as Wrong verb form
be deducted
early
as possible.
Yours Sincerely,Rephrase
soon
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task achievement
Ensure that the letter has a clear introduction, ample development of each point, and a conclusion that effectively summarizes the writer's concerns and requests. Address all parts of the task with adequate detail.
logical structure
The letter's logical structure needs improvement. Your ideas should flow naturally from one to the next. Use paragraphs to separate different thoughts and connect them with appropriate transitional phrases.
single idea per paragraph
Make clear separations between paragraphs and ensure that each paragraph addresses a single idea or point. Avoid merging multiple concerns or requests in a single paragraph.
greeting and closing
Open your letter with a proper salutation, such as 'Dear Sir or Madam,' and close with a suitable sign-off, like 'Yours faithfully,' followed by your full name. Ensure that these elements are appropriate and consistent with the formality of the letter.
suitable writing tone
Maintain a consistently formal and polite tone throughout the letter. While some emotional concern is acceptable given the context, ensure that it is expressed professionally and without informal language or casual tone.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite