The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.
The bar graphs show the number of
graduate
and postgraduate students
in the UK who chose other options beside
full-time work after graduating in 2008. Change preposition
besides
Overall
, students
who have decided to further
their studies after graduating dominated the results. The rank between the two groups is the same with more than 60,000 graduate
students
and 6,000 postgraduate students
. In general, graduate
students
outnumbered the result if compared to postgraduate students
.
In 2008, 29,665 graduate
students
and 2,725 postgraduate students
decided to continue their education after graduating instead
of searching for a full-time job. There are more than 15,000 and 2,500 students
(graduate
and postgraduate respectively) who chose to do a part-time job instead
of becoming a full-time employee.
More than 15,000 students
(16,235 graduate
students
and 1,625 postgraduate students
) remain unemployed after finishing their studies in 2008. Only a few amounts of people (3,500 graduate
students
and 345 postgraduate students
) applied as a volunteer after leaving college.Submitted by buttercookies28
on
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