The diagrams below show changes that have taken place in the Sawry District neighbourhood since 1920. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two maps illustrate the changes in the same neighbourhood in the Sawry District in the
last
century.
Overall
, the Tulebug Bros building got
replaced with Verb problem
was
Yang
office. Correct article usage
the Yang
Additionally
, the primary school
expanded to be larger than the old school
. Furthermore
, the whole neighbourhood faced a significant grow
in apartments, houses and shops.
Replace the word
growth
To begin
with, in
the north Change preposition
on
side
of Oak Avenue, the Yang office complex replaced the large factory Tulebug Bros in the west area. Moreover
, there is a new bridge that crosses the Elmwood river
connected with the same road from Oak Avenue.
Capitalize word
River
In
Change preposition
On
south
Add an article
the south
side
of Oak Avenue, there is a
major Correct article usage
apply
changes
happened Change the noun form
change
such
as the Lonoco Petrol station and the new Prestwich primary school
that is
located in
the east Change preposition
on
side
of Miller's Lake. Additionally
, a
new two apartments Correct article usage
apply
along with
a new shop were built in
the north Change preposition
on
side
of the primary school
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