The chart gives information on the percentage of women going into higher education in five countries for the years 1980 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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the
information about the percentage of Correct article usage
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women
going into higher studies
in the United Kingdom, The United States of America, Australia, South Korea and France for the years 1980 and 2015.
Overall
, it is clear from the histogram that in 1980 women
opting for higher studies
in different countries were lower, when
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than
women
compared in 2015. Moreover
, both in 1980 and 2015 had some fluctuations. Although
women
in 1980 initially
had a downward trend, eventually they rose higher in
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Firstly
, in 2015 women
going for higher studies
was about 55% in the UK, being
higher than in 1980 approximately 20%. Unnecessary verb
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Then
it rose to almost 60% in the country
USA and Australia. Fix the agreement mistake
countries
However
, the figure showed a deep decrease to 30% in South Korea and managed to escalate around
55% in the country France.
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, in 1980 women
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studies
was about 35% in the UK, then
the bar showed a steady growth for the following two countries approximately around
38% in the USA and 57% in Australia. Rephrase
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Furthermore
, the bar chart displayed a sudden decrease to 15% in South Korea and made a significant impact on the country France ranging around 50% at the end
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