The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.

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IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.

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activities excluding full-time work after graduating from university in the UK in 2008

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Nov 21, 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

23 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Graduate
Postgraduate
Full-time work
Further education
Part-time work
Unemployment
Volunteering
Traveling
Gap year
Career progression
Job market
Transition
Academic life
Professional sphere
Economic factors
Social factors
Financial crisis
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The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.

You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter • explain why you want to take time off work • give details of the amount of time you need • suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

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People have different ways of escaping the stress and difficulites of modern life. Some read, some exercise, others work in their gardens. What do you think is the best way of reducing stress.