the charts below show the percentage of volunteers by organizations in 2008 and 2014
The given pie charts
demonstrates
the Change the verb form
demonstrate
changes
in the number of people work
unpaid by Wrong verb form
working
remain
association, environment, art, Wrong verb form
remaining
sport
, health
care, educational
and others between 2008 and 2014.
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education
Overall
, it can clearly be seen that almost Correct article usage
a percent
percent
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per cent
in
each Change preposition
of
organizations
witnessed Change to a singular noun
organization
a
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a change
changes
changes
from 2008 to 2014. As a result
half group in 2008 increasing
in 2014, and three other percentages Wrong verb form
increased
decreasing
in the next Wrong verb form
decreased
year
.
In terms of the proportion of volunteers whose
entertained in environmental, Correct pronoun usage
who
sport
and Fix the agreement mistake
sports
health
care organizations
experienced a slight rose
in the next Correct your spelling
rise
year
, sport
increased significantly by 10%, than
environmental and Replace the word
then
health
upward slightly from 21 % and 7% to 29% and 8% respectively. However
, the biggest main changes
over the organizations
per volunteer
was sport
and the least was health
care volunteer
.
Regarding the other volunteer
that Fix the agreement mistake
volunteers
provide
decline total percentages in each Wrong verb form
provided
organizations
in two different Change to a singular noun
organization
year
, Art, Change to a plural noun
years
educational
and other Replace the word
education
group
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groups
was
witnessed a significant decline from 2008 to 2014. Unnecessary verb
apply
Moreover
, art and other organizations
total Change noun form
organizations'
organization's
volunteer
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volunteers
was demonstrates
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demonstrated
the
similar total Correct article usage
apply
changes
by
6 percent between 2008 and 2014, beside educational was the main Change preposition
of
organizations
was
experienced Unnecessary verb
apply
a
biggest decrease in the next Change the article
the
year
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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