The chart below shows the resultsof a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five australian cities. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The bar chart illustrates the percentage of city residents on three ways of buying and drinking
coffee
and tea according to
a survey in five cities in Australia in the last
4 weeks. In general, most people rather go to a café, while
the least popular way is to buy fresh coffee
.
According to
the figure, the highest percentage of individuals who prefer café is for Melbourne and Hubert about 63%, and the lowest is for Adelaide by
less than 50%. Change preposition
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However
, buying instant coffee
is the second most preferred way, mostly in Hobart by around 55%, and least in Sydney by 46%. On the other hand
, fewer residents prefer buying fresh coffee
. for instance
, in Brisbane, less than 35% bought fresh coffee
.
The order of preference is the same in the four cities, but in Adelaide, the most preferred way is buying instant coffee
at 50% and going to the café is in second place at 49%.
Overall
city residents prefer to have prepared coffee
instead
of providing it by themselves.Submitted by Farzaneh Ka on
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