The chart below shows the resultsof a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five australian cities. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The bar chart illustrates the percentage of city residents on three ways of buying and drinking
coffee
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and tea
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a survey in five cities in Australia in the
last
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4 weeks. In general, most people rather go to a café,
while
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the least popular way is to buy fresh
coffee
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.
According to
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the figure, the highest percentage of individuals who prefer café is for Melbourne and Hubert about 63%, and the lowest is for Adelaide
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less than 50%.
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, buying instant
coffee
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is the second most preferred way, mostly in Hobart by around 55%, and least in Sydney by 46%.
On the other hand
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, fewer residents prefer buying fresh
coffee
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.
for instance
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, in Brisbane, less than 35% bought fresh
coffee
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. The order of preference is the same in the four cities, but in Adelaide, the most preferred way is buying instant
coffee
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at 50% and going to the café is in second place at 49%.
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city residents prefer to have prepared
coffee
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instead
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of providing it by themselves.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "according to".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Consumption patterns
  • Predominance
  • Demographics
  • External factors
  • Seasonality
  • Cultural influences
  • Health benefits
  • Caffeine content
  • Social settings
  • Expenditure
  • Survey data
  • Consumer behavior
  • Taste preferences
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