The line graph shows the proportion of students aged 18-25 studying in the universities of Singapore, Malaysia, Philippines and Thailand from 1961 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph data displayed information about the percentage of university students aged 18-25

years

old in four

south east

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southeast

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asia

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Asian

countries.

Overall

,

Singapore

and

Malaysia

were dominant in the

students

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student's

students'

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proportions

while

Philiphines

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Philippines

and

Singapore

were

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slowly increased.

Singapore

and

Malaysia

both reached the highest percentages in the year 2011.

Singapore

down slowly from

year

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1961

with

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at

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25% to 1991

with

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at

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20%, after

that

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that,

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the country skyrocketed and reached

the

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a

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peak

at

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of

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41% in 2011.

Menwhile

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Meanwhile

,

Malaysia

shared up and downs trend from 20% in 1981 and doubled the rates to 40% in the next 20

years

. The other two countries,

Philippines

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the Philippines

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and

Malaysia

showed slower progression

on

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in

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the university students percentages.

Malaysia

increased

5

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by 5

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% between 1971 and 1991

then

constant at 15% from 1991 until 2011.

Philippines

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The Philippines

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displayed

slow

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a slow

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trend as well they

need

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needed

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30

years

to

increased

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8

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by 8

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% from 7% in 1961 to 15% in 1991. 20

years

later

Philippines

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the Philippines

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reached the

hingest

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highest

point at 20% in 2011.