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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart shows the global proportions of different types of energy produced annually. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart shows the global proportions of different types of energy produced annually. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The percentage of annual global
electricity
production
 is
ullistrated
Correct your spelling
illustrated
 in the pie chart below. The figures show that there are three main segments on the graph. Other types of
energy
 are less than 10% of all
production
 of the year. Looking
to
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at
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Correct article usage
the propotions
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propotions
Correct your spelling
proportions
 of various types of
energy
, it is
obivious
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obvious
 that coal is
the
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apply
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dominant among others and recorded as 39%. The predominant positions are natural gas and hydro, presented as 25% and 20% respectively. Another three types of
energy
 are nuclear, oil and other, followed by less
that
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than
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 10%
from
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of
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 all
anual
Correct your spelling
annual
electricity
production
. The biggest among them is nuclear
energy
,
otherwise
 oil and other
energy
 recorded as 5% only.
Summarize
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 the information on the graph of
annual
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the annual
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production
 of
electricity
, the biggest
propotion
Correct your spelling
proportion
 of global
electricity
 is specified as coal.
On the other hand
, the smallest percentage is presented as oil.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, production, energy with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "presented" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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