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The pie charts demonstrate the percentage of participant from different organizations in 2008 and 2014.

#percentage #participant #organizations
Overall
,
it is clear that
 the
participant
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 of organizations represents the largest portion of
environment
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, sports, and
health
care
,
whereas
 art, education, and others
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 undoubtedly the smallest. Over and above that
health
care
 was the least popular throughout 2 years.
According to
 the illustration, the figure of volunteers in 2008, volunteering from educational topped the list with a percentage of 24%, slightly higher than environmental at 21%.
Furthermore
, the percentage of
participant
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 in art
around
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 18%, as
resist
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 to 15%
from
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 sports and others. Meanwhile,
volunteers
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volunteers'
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 work in
health
care
 was only amounted to 7%.
On the other hand
,
sharp
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 increase in volunteering for environmental and sports organizations exactly 29% and a quarter in 2014. Which is
then
 followed by
educational
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around
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 17% and art
12
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%. The lowest was followed by other kinds of volunteering
organisation
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organisations
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 with 9%, making it slightly more well-known than
health
care
 at just 8%.
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