The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph below illustrates the proportion of owned and rented houses in England and Wales over a period of 93
years
.
Overall
, there are more rented households
than owned in all the years
except for 1971. Before 1971 the number
of owned households
decreased over the years
, and after
this
year, it started to increase.
In 1918 there were approximately 78% rented household
and 22% owned houses. In the next two Fix the agreement mistake
households
periods
the proportion remained stable at 69% and 31% for rented and owned Add a comma
periods,
households
respectively. Between 1953 and 1961 the number
of rented accommodation
dropped by 10%, which is the same amount Fix the agreement mistake
accommodations
in
which the Change preposition
by
owned
Correct quantifier usage
number of owned
accommodation
increased.
In 1971, both types of accommodation
where
split equally, 50% each, Correct your spelling
were
while
in the next ten years
the rented Add a comma
years,
households
rose steadily by 10% to 60%. Between 1981 and 2001 the number
owned
Change preposition
of owned
accommodation
went down to just above 20%. Finally
, at the end
of the period, the number
of owned households
rose by 5% to approximately 36%, with a drop in rented accommodation
to 64%.Submitted by elenazheng1211 on
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