The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

The charts below show

the average percentages

in typical meals of three

types of nutrients, all of

which may be unhealthy

if eaten too much.
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The graphs illustrate the
proportions
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of
Sodium
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, saturated fat, and added sugars in an average meal in the USA.
Overall
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, the breakfast had the lowest
proportions
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of all three types of nutrients.
On the other hand
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, the majority of
sodium
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and saturated fat are consumed at dinner,
whereas
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the added sugar is mostly consumed at snack time
Sodium
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and Saturated fat had roughly the same consuming
proportions
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in all 4 periods. They both were consumed the most at the dinner,
sodium
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-43% and saturated fat-37%. And they were highly consumed at lunch, with a slight difference of 3% for the
sodium
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.
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, the least of them was consumed at the breakfast, 16% for saturated fats and 14% for
sodium
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. But there was a considerable difference in
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at snack time. When snacks only took 14% in
sodium
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proportion, it was just over the fifth on saturated fats making a difference of 7%.
In contrast
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, the majority of added sugar was consumed at snacks at 42%, but the least was consumed at breakfast at 16%. Slightly higher was the proportion of lunch (19%). The percentage of dinner was almost a quarter making it second after snacks.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words proportions, sodium with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Nutrients
  • Unhealthy
  • Daily intake
  • Percentage
  • Carbohydrates
  • Fats
  • Proteins
  • Meals
  • Balanced diet
  • Consumption
  • Excess
  • Health implications
  • Obesity
  • Diabetes
  • Heart disease
  • Convenience foods
  • Fast foods
  • Socioeconomic factors
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Healthy eating habits
  • Dietary recommendations
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