The graph shows the number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The picture depicts the total number of visitors to The national
museum
every five years starting from 1980 to 2015. The Louvre Museum
excelled by increasing gradually while
the London Science Museum
decreased gradually and reached the bottom place.
Not only The London Science Museum
but also
The Shenzhen Museum
had lower enthusiasts in 1980 with The number of people were 4 million
and 5 million
respectively. Surprisingly, there was a huge escalation in 2015 showing the number of visitors that came to The Vatican Museum
was up to 8,7 million
(close to The Louvre's).
Moreover
, there was a big gap between The Vatican Museum
's guests and The Shenzhen Museum
's guests in 2015 which was nearly 5 million
people differentiation. In contrast
, in 1980 the deviation between these two museums was lower than 1 million
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