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The table below shows average hours and minutes spent by UK males and females on different daily activities.

The table below shows average hours and minutes spent by UK males and females on different daily activities.
#hours #minutes #uk #males #females #activities
The given table illustrates
the
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how much
time
spent
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for
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on
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dailing
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daily
routing
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routine
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 for
men
 and
women
 in
UK
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the UK
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.
Overall
, both
male
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males
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 and
female
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females
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 mostly
spend
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spent
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for
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on
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 sleep
while
 the lowest
time
spend
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for
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on
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 sports. For
employement
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employment
 and study boys
use
 3.45
hours
 and girls
use
 2.26
hours
.
However
, they spend considerable
time
for
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watching TV/DVD and listening to radio/music, female 2.50 and male 2.25
hours
 per day. Doing
house work
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housework
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 and child care for
female
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females
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use
closely
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more closely
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boubled
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doubled
time
 than
male
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males
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, which is 3
hours
women
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for women
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 and 1.41
hours
men
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for men
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 for hous work and
women
 0.32
hours
and
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men
 0.15
hours
 for
men
.
According to
this
 chart personal care and resting girls spend
same
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the same
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 munites per day (0.48
hours
),
similarly
, childcare and voluntary work and meeting
men
 spend
same
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the same
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 minutes which is 0.15
hours
.
Male
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Males
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 travel 1.32
hours
while
female
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females
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 travel 1.22
hours
. Both
men
 and
women
use
one third
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 of
hours
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the hours
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 for sleeping per day, 8.04 and 8.18
hours
 respectively,
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words time, men, women, use, hours with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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