The Government’s investment in arts, music and theatre is a waste of money. Government should invest these funds in public services instead .To what extent do you agree with the statements?

There are many forms of art

such

as music and theatre that could give an additional quality and dimension

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our nation’s movement. Even though there is a group of citizen that reject a budget allocation to

arts

for several reasons, there is still a community which push and hope the government

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bring money resources to the

arts

. From my perspective,

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do not agree with a sentence that states the money should go to public services

instead

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the

arts

sector. There are several reasons why

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choose not to support the statement. The main

reason

is as people live in a country we certainly have a huge amount of cultural variations like dances, folk music, and unique types of painting. These kinds of

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need to be protected. The parliament ought to press the president through the Ministry of Art and deliver the urgencies to protect what we have as a population because

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believe

arts

has

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been here hundred years ago and it contains a message for all of us to maintain and keep the stories heard to

our

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next generation.

For example

, a few centuries ago we lived in the

kingdom state

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region. We were led by the king and it had important backstories of how our home was created. The demand to keep our culture safe and everlast

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the main

reason

why

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do

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not

inline

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with the statement.

Furthermore

, we ought to realise that

arts

such

as our traditional

cloths

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or traditional foods could become diplomatic tools. In my point of view, we better stand strong among other nations,

hence

, the spectrum of our

culinaries

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culinary

could be our weapon to become stronger. There are voices who say that we do not

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save our classic beverages because we could find those drinks easily.

On the other hand

, we do not acknowledge that those particular things could help us in an important discussion between nations.

For instance

, imagine if our president wears a traditional textile

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United

Nation

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meeting and the president gives a speech

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that occasion. That situation not only share our idea but

also

our rich cultures.

This

is another

reason

why

arts

could be our negotiation’s grease. In conclusion, there is more than one

reason

for the government to give monetary attention

such

as to keep the heritage alive and use

arts

as diplomatic tools. I remain on the same wavelength with

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idea to allocate a budget for

arts

.