In some countries children have very strict rules of behaviour, while in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they want. To what extent should children have to follow rules? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

There are controversial opinions on raising

children

around the globe. In the Western part of the

world

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children

are permitted to do anything they want,

while

in Eastern countries they experience a lot of limitations. In my opinion, offspring should have

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freedom

in their actions. One of the benefits of setting strict rules for

children

is that they are learning how

behave

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politily

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politely

in society. It means that once

children

enter the community of people they are likely to communicate with them properly.

For instance

, the recent scientific research in

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kindergartens

kindergarten

reveals the data, that

children

, who have

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strict

parents are well-behaved,

while

others are very rebellious.

Moreover

, families, where

children

are limited in their actions

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possibility of facing a kidnapping issue.

In other words

, the overprotection of their offspring can literally save their

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in case of danger.

For instance

,

children

, who are obligated to call their parents every 2 hours won't be an easy target for criminal people. Despite the positive aspects mentioned above, there are many drawbacks

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such

restrictions.

Firstly

,

children

, who are overprotected by their relatives tend to grow less independent and responsible.

This

means that they will not be able to handle any difficulties related to their study, communication with peers, preparing homework

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etc

. In Finland,

for instance

, school students spend most of

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time on their own, and their grades are

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significantly

high.

Secondly

, giving more freedom would

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encourage

children

's critical thinking.

This

aspect is beneficial nowadays.

To sum up

, balancing both strict rules and

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freedom

is essential for holistic development. It provides a range of

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opportunities

for kids in the future.