The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant
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A glance at the paragraph provides comparisons between copper, nickel, and zinc in the percentage annual change price during the period of 2014. It is evident that three types of metals saw considerable fluctuations every month. Increasing sharply
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the beginning of the year, nickel rose 6%,
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continued to decline until June, the lowest -3% change in price.
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of the year, 1% changed.
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, copper showed a difference of just 0.5% from January to December. Meanwhile, zinc from February brought a sustained decline until June and steadily up from October until December. it is interesting to note that from July to September, the three types of metals were followed by steady percentages without any changes for 3 months.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuate
  • volatile
  • stability
  • peak
  • trough
  • increment
  • decrement
  • steady
  • gradual
  • sharp
  • increase
  • decrease
  • month-on-month
  • average monthly change
  • commodity
  • benchmark
  • trend
  • precipitous
  • plateau
  • significant
  • marginal
  • surge
  • dip
  • plummet
  • soar
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