The diagram details the process of making leather products. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The diagram details the process of making leather products.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The given illustration displays how leather products are transformed into
high quality
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high-quality
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goods. From sourcing the
animals
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animal's
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skins ,
cleaning
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and processing them through several chemical components with the help of physical motions of specified machinery.
To begin
with the procurement of the untreated material from regulated and official tanners, to the cleaning of these in a bath with a particular wash made from lime diluted in water to break down the protein before soaking it in a new mixture with a higher concentration of like.
After
this
is
then
flatted out between two large metal cylinders and tanned in a solution of water and vegetable by-products. The next stage would be for the leather to be polished until shiny to
finally
arrive in the hands of experienced and talented
craftsman’s
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employees of the workshop, where they would create the high-end accessories used in
todays
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fashion world.
To sum up
,
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is understandable the price tag of leather accessories as the production from start to end is long and
required
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requires
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a lot of care.
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