The diagram details the process of making leather products. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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high quality
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goods. From sourcing the
animals
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animal's
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skins ,
cleaning
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and processing them through several chemical components with the help of physical motions of specified machinery.
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with the procurement of the untreated material from regulated and official tanners, to the cleaning of these in a bath with a particular wash made from lime diluted in water to break down the protein before soaking it in a new mixture with a higher concentration of like.
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flatted out between two large metal cylinders and tanned in a solution of water and vegetable by-products. The next stage would be for the leather to be polished until shiny to
finally
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arrive in the hands of experienced and talented
craftsman’s
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employees of the workshop, where they would create the high-end accessories used in
todays
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fashion world.
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is understandable the price tag of leather accessories as the production from start to end is long and
required
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a lot of care.
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