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The maps below show the changes that occured to a town named Willington in 1780, 1860 and 2000.

The maps below show the changes that occured to a town named Willington in 1780, 1860 and 2000.
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The following maps illustrate the notable alterations in
Willington
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 for the years 1780,1860 and 2000. In an
overall
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 context,
Willington
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 had
underwent
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undergone
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 urbanization in terms of the construction the new houses and social facilities ,
whereas
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 the area of the farm and green lands decreased over the span of the years. Examining the details, the number of accomodations surged by a significant amount, from 100 to 500 in
Willington
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 through the years.
Moreover
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,
Willington
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 witnessed
building
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the building
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 of the new bridge on the river in 1860 and
wetland
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a wetland
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 for the birds in 2000 in the
south
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southern
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 part of the city.
Furthermore
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, the green areas of
Willington
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 had been replaced by
the
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apply
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schools and sports plots, and
the
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apply
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new shopping places were erected along the river in 2000. Another pivotal change was
declining
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the decline of
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 the areas of farm fields in 1860
and
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which
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 completely
knocking
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knocked
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 down in 2000.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words willington with synonyms.
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