The maps below show the changes that occured to a town named Willington in 1780, 1860 and 2000.

The maps below show the changes that occured to a town  named Willington in 1780, 1860 and 2000.
The following maps illustrate the notable alterations in
Willington
for the years 1780,1860 and 2000. In an
overall
context,
Willington
had
underwent
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urbanization in terms of the construction the new houses and social facilities ,
whereas
the area of the farm and green lands decreased over the span of the years. Examining the details, the number of accomodations surged by a significant amount, from 100 to 500 in
Willington
through the years.
Moreover
,
Willington
witnessed
building
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the building
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of the new bridge on the river in 1860 and
wetland
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a wetland
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for the birds in 2000 in the
south
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part of the city.
Furthermore
, the green areas of
Willington
had been replaced by
the
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apply
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schools and sports plots, and
the
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new shopping places were erected along the river in 2000. Another pivotal change was
declining
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the decline of
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the areas of farm fields in 1860
and
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which
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completely
knocking
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knocked
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down in 2000.
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