I am writing a request for improvement in your
house
.
Since I looked Use synonyms
your
Change preposition
at your
house
I felt great that there is more space in your flat. Use synonyms
Besides
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this
, the small garden and garage Linking Words
is
Change the verb form
are
also
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providing
for tenants. The unique style of your Wrong verb form
provided
house
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is
attracted many tenants. The Verb problem
has
house
is quintessential one bedroom and washroom but your flat has given two Use synonyms
bedroom
and Change to a plural noun
bedrooms
kitchen
. The ventilation system Correct article usage
a kitchen
is
Unnecessary verb
apply
also
impressed me and my family.
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However
, the problem in your Linking Words
house
is Use synonyms
water
and gas
system because when we use Use synonyms
Use synonyms
water
tank it is empty. We are Correct article usage
a water
living
Verb problem
leaving
six
members and it is not enough of Change preposition
with six
small
Correct article usage
a small
water
tank for us. Use synonyms
Linking Words
Although
, the gas pressure is low in the winter season and it is difficult to use hot Correct word choice
However
water
. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, my Linking Words
chlidren
felt sick Correct your spelling
children
due to
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cold
Correct article usage
the cold
water
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in
these days because there is no geyser here. These issues should be resolved Change preposition
apply
otherwise
we cannot live for longer in your apartment.
I would like to suggest you Linking Words
to
rectify these problems because of the maintenance of your Remove the particle
apply
house
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as well as
your Linking Words
house
demand will increase in the future.
I am looking forward to hearing you again.
Yours Sincerely,Use synonyms
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