The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
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graph depicts historical and forecast data about the consumption of 6 types of energy in the USA over 50 years.
Overall
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, there was an upward trend in the use of fuels except hydraulic power.
While
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the majority was fossil, the opposite could be seen in renewables. Standing at 35
quadrillion
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, the most used energy was allocated in petrol and oil in 1980,
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the lowest belonged to nuclear, solar and wind, and hydropower with only 4
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. Before gradually increasing to reach 50
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in 2030,
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number witnessed a fluctuating growth of 5
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Similarly
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, coal and natural gas experienced a steady rise, at 20
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then
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coal and was predicted to increase to 30
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and natural gas to remain stable at 25
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, renewables, nuclear, solar and wind, and hydropower shared the same power consumption, at 4
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units in 1980. These figures saw a gradual increase over 15 years.
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nuclear, solar and wind were expected to climb by 6 and 5 respectively, energy from water was predicted to fall to 3
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, the lowest point in 2030.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words quadrillion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • energy consumption
  • projections
  • renewable energy
  • non-renewable resources
  • sustainable
  • fossil fuels
  • nuclear energy
  • biofuels
  • hydroelectric power
  • solar energy
  • wind energy
  • trends
  • increases/decreases
  • shifts
  • milestones
  • significant
  • forecast
  • implications
  • sustainable development
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