The charts below show the average temperatures in 12 months in three cities and how many hours of sunshine these cities have in a year.
The diagrams illustrate the average temperatures in every month of
year
in three cities and how many hours of sunshine these cities have in a year.
Add an article
the year
Overall
it is very noticeable that New York has very
big amount of hours of sunshine, Add an article
a very
during
London has half of Change preposition
while
Sydneys's
time.
As we can see, for cities except Sydney summer Correct your spelling
Sydney's
monthes
gave them Correct your spelling
months
such
a huge advantage and increased their time to the peak at 30 hour
. Change to a plural noun
hours
As well as
London which has an
gradual increase from January to Juli and Change the article
a
similarli
has a decrease from August to December. It is undeniable that Sydeney's pagodas Correct your spelling
similarly
Add a missing verb
are wierd
wierd
to compare others, as their process Correct your spelling
weird
exactly
oppositely.
In conclusion,Add a missing verb
is exactly
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