There is little doubt that global tourism brings merits to several places,
although
some proponents contend that its social and environmental impacts are concerning. Linking Words
This
essay will delve into both perspectives, Linking Words
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whereas
I believe that the benefits outweigh the drawbacks for some reasons.
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To begin
with, popular destinations with crowded visitors will decrease Linking Words
its
cleanliness. Correct pronoun usage
their
This
is because of the managers' lack of prevention and monitoring Linking Words
as well as
the visiting tourists' ignorance. A lake in Semeru Mountain, Linking Words
for instance
, has been flooded with wastes Linking Words
such
as food leftovers, plastics, and empty oxygen cans, from both domestic and international hikers on public holidays. Linking Words
Thus
, the ramifications of tourism on popular places, particularly natural destinations, can be disastrous to local communities and environments.
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On the other hand
, the positive impact of global visitors Linking Words
to
the local economy is undeniable. It flourishes businesses owned by locals including accommodation services like hotels and car rents, food and beverages outlets, and other enterprises. One clear example is how Bali's economy highly depends on its worldwide tourists as they mainly occupy the resorts and villas, spend millions on fancy dinners in local restaurants, and buy Change preposition
on
the
tickets to every recreational destination Correct article usage
apply
in
the island. Change preposition
on
Furthermore
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this
will Linking Words
also
reduce the Linking Words
national's
unemployment rate as these enterprises need workers to maintain their businesses, especially during peak seasons like Change noun form
national
Christmas
holiday.
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To conclude
, international tourism brings advantages and disadvantages towards the space and its surroundings. Linking Words
However
, I contend that its positive impact Linking Words
to
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on
local
economy is undeniable and far outweighs its drawbacks, which can be prevented through the betterment of managers' monitoring system and visitors' awareness to keep the place clean.Add an article
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