You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel. Write a letter to the hotel, making the arrangements. In your letter tell them when you will be arriving and leaving explain what type of rooms you would like, and ask how much the weekend will cost ask about activities and places of interest near the hotel

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

this

letter to schedule a booking for five adults at

hotel

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Hotel

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Seaview for the next weekend.

Sence

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Since

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the next weekend is a long weekend I and my family are planning a staycation at your

hotel

. We plan to start our travel on

saturday

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Saturday

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morning at 8 am and will reach

hotel

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the hotel

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by noon. The day of departure from the

hotel

will be Monday evening around 5 pm. As we are five adults I would prefer a room that can

accomodate

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accommodate

us all

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apply

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room

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a room

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with two queen beds and a single bed would be our first preference. Before finalising the booking I would want to understand the charges for our stay and what services will be included. I have

head

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heard

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a lot about the water activities and fancy beach

cafe's

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cafes

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nearby.

However

would appreciate

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it if

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can

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could

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get some more information regarding if any prior bookings would be needed and how much would be the charges for the same. Hope to hear back from you. Sincerely, Sahil Verma

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Ensure each paragraph presents a single idea clearly and succinctly, without mingling multiple requests or pieces of information. Additionally, consider enhancing logical connectors and transitions to improve flow.

task achievement

While the primary objectives of the letter have been addressed, some details could be expanded upon, such as specifying the exact dates for better clarity. Ensure that all aspects of the task are fully covered and the purpose of the letter is fully achieved.

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

173 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Accommodation
Arrival and departure
Sea view
Family suite
Cost estimate
Activities and amenities
Water sports
Cultural sites
Natural attractions
Places of interest
Confirmation of booking
Warm regards

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