You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The line graph depicts a comparison between female
graduates
and male graduates
who pass
from a Wrong verb form
passed
university
in Canada
from 1992 until 2007. Overall
, the quantity
of female Change the quantifier
number
graduates
from the
Correct article usage
apply
university
in Canada
significantly rose, on the other hand
, Males who graduated from university
increased slightly in that period.
In
1992 until 1995 the number of Change preposition
From
graduates
both female and male in The University
in Canada
rose slight
from Change the adjective
slightly
bellow
100,000 Correct your spelling
below
graduates
to over 100,000 for female graduates
and for male
starting from 70,000 Fix the agreement mistake
males
graduates
to just under 80,000 graduates
. However
, in the next periode
(around 1995 to 1999) the amount of Correct your spelling
period
graduates
(female and male) decrease
slightly by around 5,000 (female Wrong verb form
decreased
graduates
) and around 7,000 (male graduates
).
In
2000 until 2006, the Change preposition
From
mount
of female Correct your spelling
amount
graduates
from university
in Canada
rose dramatically from over 100,000 and reached a peak just
under 150,000 Change preposition
of just
graduated
in 2006. Wrong verb form
graduates
While
, The number of male graduates
unstable
between 1999 Add a missing verb
was unstable
until
2001, Starting from 2002 until 2006, the Correct word choice
and
amount
of male Change the quantifier
number
graduates
remarkable
rose by 17,000 male Change the word
remarkably
graduates
and reached a peak in 2006.Submitted by syah.lian.ju on
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words graduates, university, canada with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 3 times.
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