You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you. Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter advise them of your situation explain how this is affecting you request a new card You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear

Dear Sir Now I am studying
in
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univerisity
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university
. Basically, I
everyday
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go
a
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lot
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places.
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yesterday I went
library
and went to
restaurant
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a restaurant
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.So I came to
dormitory
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and saw my bag. There was not my
student
identification
card
. I did not know how
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. And I searched
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student
identification
card
but I did not find my
student
identification
card
. I have to find my
identification
card
otherwise
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am
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not
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by
university's
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the university's
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guard.My exam is approaching so I should prepare
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my exams. If my
student
identification
card
is find
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, I will use
university's
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the university's
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library
.
Next
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reason if my
card
is not find
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, I will get behind
from
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lessons.Of
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cour
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course
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this
contributes to bad
condition
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. But I do not want
.
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Director I have got you a request.
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I  would like your
finding
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my
student
identification
card
. Because my
card
is have to find and I use university's
library
.My exam is approaching.
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has got a lot
useful
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book
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books
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for me and I should read them.I have a new idea. If you can
make
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, you will give me
new
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card
. Is it possible or impossible? I look forward to
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hearing from you.
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greeting and closing
You need to ensure that your letter has a clear structure with an appropriate opening and closing. It should begin with 'Dear [Title and Name]' followed by a comma and end with a suitable sign-off such as 'Yours sincerely' or 'Yours faithfully,' accompanied by your full name.
single idea per paragraph
Work on organizing your letter into clear paragraphs where each paragraph contains one main idea or point.
complete response
The tasks have been completed to a minimal extent. The response needs to provide a clear explanation of the situation, how it affects you and a polite request for a new card.
suitable writing tone
The tone of your letter is a bit too casual and indirect for formal correspondence with a director. Aim for a more formal and direct approach while making requests.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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