The line graph below shows the population size, birth rate and the death rate of England and Wales from 1700 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows the population size, birth rate and the death rate of

England and Wales from 1700 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and

reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph compares the mortality and the amount of population in every 1000 people live in England and Wales over a period of 300 years.
overall
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, the trend for
birth
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and
death
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rates was similar except for the
last
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50 years.
Moreover
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, the population size went up over the period shown. Between 1700 and 1950, the
rate
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of
death
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and
birth
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decreased dramatically by 7 and 8, respectively. In the subsequent years, the figure for the
birth
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rate
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soared by 10 (per 1000 people),
while
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that of the
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rate
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levelled out at 20. It is worth noting that during the entire
period
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period,
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the
birth
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rate
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was much higher than the
death
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rate
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. The number of citizens in the mentioned countries grew significantly from nearly 3 to just under 50 million from 1700 to 2000.
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, the population size remained roughly the same at 10 million from 1750 to 1800.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words birth, death, rate with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuations
  • stabilize
  • steep
  • advancements
  • notable
  • shift
  • norms
  • impact
  • critical factor
  • relatively stable
  • Industrial Revolution
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