The pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in new Zealand in 2003 and 2013.

The pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in new Zealand in 2003 and 2013.
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The diagrams compare the proportion of four different parts of retail online shopping in New Zealand within a decade, from 2003 to 2013.
Overall
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it is clear that
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in each year travel and entertainment created the greatest segments proportionally;
while
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books and clothes were the final ranks in 2003 and 2013 respectively. Focusing on 2003 percentages, what stands out from the scheme is that travelling was the most dominant interest among people so that, more than a quarter of sales was made up of that.
Also
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, dress, music and film had roughly identical approval, 24% and 21% respectively. The
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and least fraction belonged to books with just 19 per cent of the total retail sectors. Regarding 2013 fractions, it can be seen that film and music gained more popularity and increased by 12%.
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, books followed the same pattern to reach 22% of the retail in 2013.
Conversely
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, voyaging and outfits declined to place in fourth and third positions, with 29% and 16%.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Comparative analysis
  • E-commerce
  • Retail sectors
  • Growth rate
  • Decade
  • Decline
  • Trends
  • Online transactions
  • Consumer behavior
  • Market share
  • Significant increase/decrease
  • Digital era
  • Accessibility
  • User-friendly platform
  • Market dynamics
  • Predictive outlook
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