It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is neccesary to help them learn this distinction. To what extend do you agree or disagree? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

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their own mistake. Mild

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are the best for infants to correct misbehaviour activities. I strongly agree with

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their buds that how they behave with good activity. If a child behaves wrongly,

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realise their mistake what did wrong which means

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when they become

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.

For instance

, Indian

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are more strict

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than other countries'

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and they immediately give

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when their kids do badly.

Hence

, these kinds of immediate

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will provide more benefits in the future.

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punishments

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behaviour because they are very little buds they might be

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and depressed after getting strict

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and teachers in order to they might be

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about the wrong behaviour before doing it.

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infants never ever do bad activities.

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toddlers.

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any mistakes in their

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but hard physical

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kids; mild

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to rectify the

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mistakes. in my opinion, about

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, I strongly agree with

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statement. I hope these kinds of

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are brought more social developments.