The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
chart illustrates the different percentage
of families' income spent weekly in 1968 and 2018 in one country.
Overview, In 1968, Fix the agreement mistake
percentages
majority
of the population's Correct article usage
the majority
incomes
Fix the agreement mistake
income
were
spent on food Correct subject-verb agreement
was
while
the lowest is
on Wrong verb form
was
fuel
and power category. On the other hand
, people in 2018 spent their income mostly on leisure activities whilst, they spent the least on fuel
and personal goods.
It is noticeable that in 1968, the biggest spending were
mostly on diet which marked 35% of it. Change the verb form
was
Meanwhile
the second biggest spending Add a comma
Meanwhile,
were
on housing and clothing and footwear, both were equal Change the verb form
was
of
10% Change preposition
to
from
their wages. Change preposition
of
In Contrast
, wages were less likely spent on fuel
and power as
with just over 5% of their money that Change preposition
apply
were
paid on that.
In 2018, Citizens were mostly Change the verb form
was
engange
in leisure activities Correct your spelling
engage
engaged
which
over 20% of their payments went to Correct word choice
and
that
activities. Correct determiner usage
those
This
was the highest spending on that year. Following that, housing was also
the second biggest investment in 2018 with almost 20% of funds spent on that category. The population also
spent the least on fuel
category and personal goods, both were not even reach
5%.Change the verb form
did not even reach
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words fuel with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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