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The line graph below shows changes in the amount of coffee exported from three countries between 2002 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows changes in the amount of coffee exported from three countries between 2002 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates changes in the amount of
coffee
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 exported by
Brazil
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,
Colombia
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, and Costa Rica from 2002 to 2012.
Overall
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, it can be seen that
Brazil
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 consistently had the highest
coffee
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exports
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 throughout the period,
while
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Colombia
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 and Costa Rica experienced fluctuations in their
export
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 quantities. Starting with
Brazil
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, in 2002,
coffee
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exports
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 stood at 12
million
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kg
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. Over the next two years, the
export
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 amount increased steadily, reaching 14
million
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kg
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 in 2004 and 15
million
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kg
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 in 2006. There was a significant jump in
exports
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 in 2008, with
Brazil
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 exporting 20
million
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kg
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 of
coffee
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.
Although
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 there was a slight decline in 2010, at 18
million
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kg
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,
Brazil
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 experienced the highest
coffee
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export
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 quantity in 2012, reaching 25
million
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kg
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.
In contrast
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,
Colombia
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 had lower
coffee
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export
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 levels compared to
Brazil
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 but experienced some fluctuations. In 2002,
Colombia
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 exported 5
million
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kg
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 of
coffee
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, which gradually increased to 7
million
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kg
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 in 2004 and
further
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 to 11
million
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kg
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 in 2006.
However
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, there was a significant drop in
coffee
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exports
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 in 2008, with only 2
million
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kg
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 being exported. Despite a slight recovery to 8
million
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kg
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 in 2010,
coffee
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exports
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 from
Colombia
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 reached their highest point in 2012 at 15
million
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kg
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, brazil, colombia, exports, export, million, kg with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuations" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • trends
  • fluctuations
  • peaked
  • plummeted
  • stabilized
  • gradual increase/decrease
  • significant growth/decline
  • surpassed
  • export volume
  • dominant exporter
  • market share
  • outperform
  • data illustration
  • time frame
  • comparative analysis
  • export figures
  • pronounced change
  • export trend
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