The table below shows the average band scores for students from different language groups taking the IELTS General Test in 2010.
The table illustrates the overage IELTS exam for students who took band scores from exams in four
countries
in 2010.
Overall
,It is clear that
participants in the IELTS exam from European countries
have taken better all-around sections than Asian countries
.Instead
of German
each country such
as:French,Indonesian,and Malay had taken the wrong results than German
.In addition
, all of the German
IELTS takers had taken
high results in the speaking section.
Comparing the two European Verb problem
achieved
countries
such
as,German
students had better results in reading and speaking section band scores an average of 6.8 and 6.9 in both sections.Reading and writing sections were less worst result on average 6.3 and 6.6 respectively.During the situation, French had taken lower score on each section than German
, the reading part was 6.1 and listening was 6.3.In addition
,Asian countries
had taken different scores.Interestingly Their speaking score was 6.6.Submitted by yoqubjonovjamshidbek23 on
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