The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Write at least 150 words.

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The two maps

illustrates

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the

norbiton

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Norbiton

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area

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in the present

days

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as well as

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, the planned development.

Overall

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, the

norbiton

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Norbiton

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industrial

area

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is located

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the east side of the town, with a river on the north, separating the farmland from the industrial

area

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, which is located in the

center

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of the map, represented by a few factory

biuldings

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buildings

and roads, followed by the main road at the extreme south of the map. The planned development shows

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substantially

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growth and modifications of the

overall

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infrastructure of the

area

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between the farmland and the main road.

Firstly

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, the planned development of the

norbiton

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Norbiton

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area

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replaces what once were factories for

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housing

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Vocabulary: Replace the words area with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

111 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

industrial area
development
infrastructure
manufacturing
facilities
transition
planning
commercial
residential
renovation
urban planning
sustainability
environmental impact
local economy
rejuvenation
construction
modernization
accessibility
demolition
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