Write a letter of application to apply for the position a vice - principle at a school.

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Dear Madam, I am writing to apply for
vice-principal
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the vice-principal
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position during
summer
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the summer
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because I have seen your recruitment application
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apply
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posted on the school’s website
since
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yesterday. I am pretty that
this
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will be a great opportunity for me to experience the school's services I have never been
before
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.
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, I do want to meet and help students as much as I can. I
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apply for
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position because I am confident that I am qualified and completely suitable to become a vice-principal.
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, I consider myself
as
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a responsible and knowledgeable person. My strength is that I always accomplish all the tasks assigned to me by others.
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, I am really hardworking and adapt well to the working environment here. I have already filled in the online application form and sent it in as requested. I am available for an interview on any weekday from 7.30 am to 6 pm. If my application is successful, I can start working immediately.
Hopefully
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I could dedicate my best
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the school. I am really looking forward to hearing from you, madam.
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greeting and closing
Ensure that you open and close your letter with appropriate salutations and sign-offs. In your case, the lack of a closing sign-off was noted. For example, consider finishing with 'Yours sincerely' or 'Kind regards' followed by your full name.
logical structure
Develop a clear structure with logical progression throughout the letter. It is beneficial to organize your letter into paragraphs with clear purposes, such as introduction, experience and qualifications, availability and closing remarks.
single idea per paragraph
Maintain a single idea per paragraph to enhance readability. This helps the reader follow your line of thought more easily. Each paragraph should be clearly distinct, representing a coherent thought or piece of information.
complete response
Expand upon your qualifications and experience more specifically related to the vice-principal role. It is essential to address all the aspects of the task given to indicate full task achievement.
suitable writing tone
Use a formal writing tone appropriate for a job application. Avoid contractions, keep a polite and respectful tone, and make sure to address the hiring personnel appropriately.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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