The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart above displays data on family expenditure in a particular country in both 1968 and 2018.
Overall
, the highest expenses in 1968 was food, while
in 2018 the
leisure took the highest proportion of Correct article usage
apply
people
weekly budget.
In 1968, most families spent their income Change noun form
people's
in
food Change preposition
on
with
35% Change preposition
at
while
the lowest rate was fuel and power with
roughly 6%. Housing and clothing Change preposition
at
footware
shared the same amount of percentages at 10%. The Correct your spelling
footwear
others sector
Fix the agreement mistake
other sectors
such
as household and goods
, personal goods
, and transport had the
rate at around 8%.
in 2018, the budget Correct article usage
a
of
leisure had the most allocation at around 22% and Change preposition
for
contrary
the lowest portion Correct word choice
apply
were
personal Correct subject-verb agreement
was
goods
and fuel at 4%. Housing marked
as the second Add a missing verb
was marked
higher
proportion with 19% Correct word choice
highest
while
foods
was Fix the agreement mistake
food
sligtly
lower byCorrect your spelling
slightly
2
% margin. The other needs Correct article usage
a 2
likes
household Change the verb form
like
goods
, clothing footware
, fuel and personal Correct your spelling
footwear
goods
were below 10%.Submitted by ryanrush16 on
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