The chart below shows the proportions of graduates from Brighton University in 2019 entering different employment sectors.

The chart below shows the proportions of graduates from Brighton University in 2019 entering different employment sectors.
The pie chart provides data about the proportions of
graduates
from Brighton University in 2019 entering different employment sectors.
Overall
, almost
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half of
graduates
studied service industries and
manufacturing
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half of
graduates
(49.3 per
cent
) went to study service industries and manufacturing Industry. The
proportion
of
graduates
who studied service industries was 33 per
cent
and the
proportion
of
graduates
who studied manufacturing industry was 16.3 per
cent
. 14.7 per
cent
of
graduates
chose to study education and 12.1 per
cent
of
students
studied politics and government. The percentages of
students
who studied transportation and warehousing and science and technology were quite similar. 7.8 per
cent
of
students
studied transportation and warehousing,
whereas
7.3 per
cent
of
students
studied science and technology. The percentages of
students
who studied charity and sport were
also
identical. The
proportion
of
students
who studied charity was 0.3 per
cent
and the percentage of
students
who studied sport was only 0.1 per
cent
, which was the lowest
proportion
compared to other majors.
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