The chart below shows the proportions of graduates from Brighton University in 2019 entering different employment sectors.
The pie chart provides data about the proportions of
graduates
from Brighton University in 2019 entering different employment sectors.
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graduates
studied service industries and manufacturing
Industry.
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graduates
(49.3 per cent
) went to study service industries and manufacturing Industry. The proportion
of graduates
who studied service industries was 33 per cent
and the proportion
of graduates
who studied manufacturing industry was 16.3 per cent
. 14.7 per cent
of graduates
chose to study education and 12.1 per cent
of students
studied politics and government.
The percentages of students
who studied transportation and warehousing and science and technology were quite similar. 7.8 per cent
of students
studied transportation and warehousing, whereas
7.3 per cent
of students
studied science and technology. The percentages of students
who studied charity and sport were also
identical. The proportion
of students
who studied charity was 0.3 per cent
and the percentage of students
who studied sport was only 0.1 per cent
, which was the lowest proportion
compared to other majors.Submitted by lilit_margaryan2006 on
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