The graph below shows the population figures of different types of turtles in India between 1980 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the population

figures of different types of turtles in India

between 1980 and 2012.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
This
graph depicts the population of various types of
turtles
in India between 1980-2012
years
.
Overall
, all kinds were on the same starting point, which is 100 units. The data provides information about Olive Ridley
Turtles
, which
has
Correct subject-verb agreement
have
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the highest population among the given types.
This
category had an enormous increase from 1980 to 1996 and the index became 140. In the following
years
Add a comma
years,
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the populace was changing and ended up in 130 units.
In contrast
, Leatherback
Turtles
had a plunge from 100 to approximately 55, even though in the first
years
had
Verb problem
there was
show examples
a steady rise. The other two categories had roughly similar statistics. They had
grows
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growth
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and drops at the exactly same time,
however
,
numbers
Correct article usage
the numbers
show examples
were a little bit different. The classification with all species had an index of nearly 100 all the time, despite the class of Green
Turtles
, which had more or less 90 through a given period.
To sum up
, the vast majority of species had a plummet during these
years
.
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