The graph below shows the population figures of different types of turtles in India between 1980 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
This
graph depicts the population of various types of turtles
in India between 1980-2012 years
. Overall
, all kinds were on the same starting point, which is 100 units.
The data provides information about Olive Ridley Turtles
, which has
the highest population among the given types. Correct subject-verb agreement
have
This
category had an enormous increase from 1980 to 1996 and the index became 140. In the following years
the populace was changing and ended up in 130 units. Add a comma
years,
In contrast
, Leatherback Turtles
had a plunge from 100 to approximately 55, even though in the first years
had
a steady rise.
The other two categories had roughly similar statistics. They had Verb problem
there was
grows
and drops at the exactly same time, Replace the word
growth
however
, numbers
were a little bit different. The classification with all species had an index of nearly 100 all the time, despite the class of Green Correct article usage
the numbers
Turtles
, which had more or less 90 through a given period.
To sum up
, the vast majority of species had a plummet during these years
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Vocabulary: Replace the words turtles, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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