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Modern forms of communication such as email and messaging have reduced the amount of time people spend seeing their friends. This has had a negative effect on their social lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is somewhat argued that modern forms of communication have reduced the
amout
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amount
 of
time
people
spending
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 on communicating
face to face
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, which has led to a negative impact on social life. In my opinion, I completely agree with
this
 statement. Many
people
 want to reduce chatting
time
 and convenience, so they often prefer texting
use
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chat
 applications.
For example
, when they are too busy with something and don't have
time
 to meet, they will
use
 it to save
time
.
However
, being too dependent on it will
encounter
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 some negative things. When you spend too much
time
 using
chat
 applications and are too dependent on them, you will feel self-conscious when you don't have much social contact.
For example
, if you
use
 text applications, you get used to it and
make
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 you lose confidence and always be shy with
people
. Encounter these things will cause poor communication skills
due to
 lack of social communication skills. When meeting
people
, they will always be silent and wait for others to ask because it is difficult to think of topics to talk about.
For example
, when chatting online, you can
use
 emojis or send funny videos to make the conversation more humorous and prolong the
chat
time
.
Overral
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Overall
, I agree with the view that using modern forms of online
chat
such
 as email and texting will have negative impacts on their social life. To avoid
this
 from happening, I hope in the future
people
 will not overuse texting but
instead
 meet up to
chat
 in the most natural way.
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  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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  • In conclusion
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  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • modern forms of communication
  • email
  • messaging
  • reduce
  • amount of time
  • see friends
  • social lives
  • technology
  • communication
  • faster
  • convenient
  • stay in touch
  • connect
  • online
  • social media platforms
  • meet new people
  • face-to-face interactions
  • maintain relationships
  • excessive reliance
  • social isolation
  • digital communication
  • emotional depth
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