Some people think that it is best to save money, for example in a bank or savings scheme. Other people feel that money should be spent whenever it is available. Discuss these views and reach an opinion on this debate.

Whether saving capital is crucial or not is always

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debetable

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debatable

debitable

argument

in

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nowadays. Some think that

money

should be saved by

the

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financial institutions or stocks

while

other

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others

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say that

savings

is

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not mandatory in

banks

, cash on

hand

is far better.

This

essay will discuss both

side

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of the argument in detail and provide evidence as to why

savings

money

is superior. On the one

hand

, many entities are provided

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with a

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a

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plenty of

savings

schemes and policies

to

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for

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the

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people who are more interested

to save

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in saving

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their cash for future needs.

Fixed

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deposit gives the

abudence

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abundance

audience

amount of

interests

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interest

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and life guarantee

about

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financially to

the

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folks especially when they

are become

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retired

while

they can fruitful their own

savings

cash.

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,

the

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USA people used to

saved

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save

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money

in

banks

but now they invest stock market to

increasing

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increase

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their

capitals

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capital

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.

Savings

money

can give peacefulness about financial crises at

present

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the present

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time

as well as

future

too

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.

On the other

hand

, funds

is

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are

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needed to satisfy our needs and wants

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at anytime

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anytime

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any time

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, so bank paper does not hold in any

banks

or

savings

policy

in

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for

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long years. Bankruptcy is the most

threaten

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threatening

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issue

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nowadays due

the

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economic crises in all nations.

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, some financial institutions and stock market

entites

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entities

are

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have

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announced bankruptcy

while

the investors have to

lost

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lose

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their entire

assests

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assets

at

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suddently

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suddenly

.

Therefore

,

savings

bank paper in

banks

or schemes is not

a

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best choice.

To conclude

, saving currency provides more benefits to

the

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mankind for future financial needs and it is

a

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one kind of

assest

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asset

.

Hence

, in my opinion

about

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this

saving currency is far better than holding bills in

hand

.