Some people believe that education and healthcare should be free of charge and funded by the government. Others think that it should be the responsibility of the people to pay for these services. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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divided

on whether the fees of

education

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and

healthcare

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system be paid by the

government

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or should it be the

civilians

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' responsibility

of being

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in charge

for

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of

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the payments. From my perspective,

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the opinion on having the fees funded by the

government

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is agreeable,

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responsibility of paying for their own

education

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and

healthcare

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services should not be neglected as

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its

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merits are far more beneficial. On the one hand, the authority should cover either totally or partially the costs of

education

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or

healthcare

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systems that are public or being operated by them.

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with, public

education

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or medical institutions' income mostly

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from the money of

civilians

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paying for social

insurances

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as medical or

education

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which are always sold by the

government

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.

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, residents who have already afforded these insurances should not be charged whenever they use public services.

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, the taxes collected from other factors

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as real

estates

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, personal income, transactions and many more should

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be used to fund the expenses of these systems.

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is

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the fact that

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civilians

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have already paid a huge sum of assets to the

government

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and those

residental

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residential

taxes account for a huge part of a nation's treasury, making it a reliable and consistent source of money to operate

education

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and medical systems.

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, individuals should not show negligence of their own payments as their obligation

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quite a significant role in the nation's affairs. First and foremost,

civilians

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, especially those who want to be educated and treated in a good environment, should pay for their own charges because there are many companies

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do not have a connection to the authority, so they need their customers' money to be their main source of income. An exemplary case to discuss is that

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private universities like MIT or Harvard have higher tuition fees compared to the other public schools. Still, they offer

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range of courses and lectures with the most qualified teaching

staffs

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within the US, making private institutions far more advantageous than their counterparts.

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, students will be fostered and educated to the level of being proficient in a specific field, producing a more professional workforce for the country,

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, boosting

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national

economical

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growth. In conclusion,

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having the costs of

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and

healthcare

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funded by the authority might be

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reasonable, the

responsiblity

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responsibility

of the people to pay for these services themselves will bring back more merits. From my point of view, funded

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and

healthcare

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institutions will not be as constructive as those private ones for countries'

benefits

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.