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The charts give information about two genres of TV programmes watched by men and women and four different age groups in Australia.

The charts give information about two genres of TV programmes watched by men and women and four different age groups in Australia.
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The graph represents information about two different
genres
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 of TV programs watched by men and women across four
age
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groups
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 in Australia.
Overall
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, the evidence suggests that the viewing habits of the
age
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groups
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 show either a downward or upward trend, except for the 45+
age
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 group, which maintains a steady
viewership
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 of almost 70%.
According to
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 the chart, fewer men watch reality shows compared to women, but women watch
game
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 shows at almost the same rate as men. Slightly more older people watch both reality and
game
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 shows compared to younger
age
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groups
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. In comparison between the two
genres
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, reality shows are more popular than
game
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 shows, with an average
viewership
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 of around 50%. The most consistent results come from the 16-24
age
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 group, which shows a
viewership
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 rate close to 50% for both
genres
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. For
game
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 shows, the
viewership
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 appears to be quite consistent across the
age
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groups
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. As can be seen from the graph, viewers in the 45+
age
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 group have the highest
viewership
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 rates for both
genres
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.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words genres, age, groups, viewership, game with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 8 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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