The charts give information about two genres of TV programmes watched by men and women and four different age groups in Australia.
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diffrent
genres of TV programmes watched by men and Correct your spelling
different
women
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different
age
groups in Australia.
Generally, in two genres the highest index
showed people who older
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were older
45
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than 45
women
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About 70% of women
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and more than men about two times which have about 35% in this
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age
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the first
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the first
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the lowest index
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which
that
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the second
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About 62% of male auditory
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that
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which
women
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between 25 and 34 showed the lowest index
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the age
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35-44 Correct pronoun usage
which
that
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the age
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35-44 showed almost the highest result in genre
of reality shows making up 65% and slightly behind the oldest Add an article
the genre
category
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