The diagrams below show the coastal village of Seaville in 1980 and 2010

The diagrams below show the coastal village of Seaville in 1980 and 2010
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagrams below show the coastal village of Seaville in 1980 and 2010
The maps give detailed information about how the coastal
village
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of Seaville developed from 1980 to 2010.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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there was a dramatic
change
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in the structure of the coastal
village
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of Seaville, particularly in the development of retirement villages,
restaraunts
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restaurants
, and holiday cottages.
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, it is
also
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worth mentioning that East Bank and the hotel remained unchanged in the given period. Looking at the western side, the first significant
change
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is that a retirement
village
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was built
nearby
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near
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a river,
while
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a boat club was constructed opposite the retirement
village
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. Another big
change
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is that a tea room and sand dunes were established and gave place to a restaurant
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the hotel was built. The final
change
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in the western direction is that holiday cottages were formed between the sea and the east bank. Turning to the east, woodland was converted into a golf course,
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marsh
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the marsh
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was demolished and replaced by permanent houses.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words village, change with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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