Some people think that subjects like arts, music, drama and creative writing contribute more towards a child's overall development. The school curriculum should provide more time for these subjects to be taught if the school wants the all-round development of children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays,

children

are more

intersted

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interested

in various

type

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types

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of fields, so numerous people think that

subjects

like arts, music,

darma

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drama

and

creative

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creativity

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contribute more towards a child’s

overall

development. They believe

schools

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schools'

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curriculum

provide

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provides

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more

time

for these

subjects

to be taught if the

schools

wants

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the all-round development of

children

. I

am agree

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with

statement

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. In

this

essay, I will explain all points in detail.

Firstly

, some

children

are not

intersted

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interested

in

study

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studying

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so that like other things like singing, painting,

dance

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dancing

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,

acting

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and acting

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. I explain it, some

students

are feeling bored

then

they do

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the same

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same

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some

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work on

daily

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a daily

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basis so

schools

add some curriculum

acitivity

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activity

for

students

and

arranging

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arrange

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some events so

chlidren

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children

are

performe

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performed

performing

their

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theirs

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.

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, as per a report

of

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by

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WHO,

children

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children's

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mind

more

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are more

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shared and developed

then

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they

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do extra activity in

schools

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school

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and they learn

time

managing

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management

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skill.

For

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hence

, the government add

the

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apply

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some

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same

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subject

in

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to

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study

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the study

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so that

children

take benefits.

On the other hand

, The

goverments

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governments

government

added these

subjects

as

a elective

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an elective subject

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subjects

, because some

students

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taste is different and they choose

acording

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according

to

own

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their own

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taste. The

schools

have limited

time

for study and

these activity

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this activity

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,

schools

proper

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properly

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manage times without

strugling

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struggling

of

sylabus

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syllabus

of

students

they have limited

time

. As per a survey

of

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by

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BBC new, every year

thousand

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thousands

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of

children

failed

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and mental depression because

school

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the school

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schedule

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so

much

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many

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headace

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headaches

and

students

have

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are

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limited

to done

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in doing

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the

assignment

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assignments

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. In conclusion, It is arts,

musicm

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music

drama and creative writing

is

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are

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good for

students

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students'

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overall

development. But if

they

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the

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student

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students

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choose based on

own

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their own

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interest

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interests

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so

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apply

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they perform better and

improved

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improve

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overall

growth.