In education and employment, some people work harder than others. Why do some people work harder than others? Is it always a good thing to work hard?

It cannot be denied that spending more time and effort on our

work

and study could usually yield more results, and

such

a

fact

leads some to generate the opinion that working harder than others is the very principle of life.

However

,

such

an idea needs to be scrutinized meticulously before a conclusion can be reached. First and foremost, it is a

fact

that

due to

the accelerating pace of life caused by the growth of

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, many tend to

work

harder than others. More goods and services are now available to us, combined with the effect of advertising, it is a natural tendency for people to desire what they do not have, resulting in an increasing number of diligent students and workers who aim to enjoy these products, tangible or intangible;

furthermore

, the growth of

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in recent centuries has

also

conglomerated societal wealth into the hands of a few,

further

burdening the ordinary working class who do not have power.

Second,

the

fact

that technology has allowed the fast spread of information indicates that people

work

harder as they see more “role models.” Take the case of the successful stories of entrepreneurs that we almost hear about every day on social media via mobile devices:

while

they are indeed a tiny portion of the population, the high frequency in which we hear about the stories leaves us the impression that

such

is the norm for every individual. Had it not been for

such

development in

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society

, we would never have formed

such

a value.

Although

some might claim that working hard is a virtue,

such

philosophy in

fact

might compromise multiple aspects of our

life

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and

the

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society

. For us, extended working or study hours could lead to a lack of physical exercise and communication with our family and

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ones, damaging our physical and mental health and

then

forming a vicious cycle in the efficiency of our

work

and study;

on the other hand

, a

society

with a heavy focus on “working hard,” namely material wealth, will produce an atmosphere with an animosity between people as they view everyone else a competitor, losing the capacity of humanity in the culture of the city, eventually forcing its citizens out

due to

excessive pressure and mental suffering. In conclusion, always working harder is a belief that

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to both individuals and

the

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society

.

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one sees a zero and another sees a circle, I am confident that my opponents will compromise after being shown

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