The bar chart below shows the numbers of men and women attending various evening courses at an adult education centre in the year 2009. The pie chart gives information about the ages of these course participants. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the numbers of men and women attending various evening courses at an adult education centre in the year 2009. The pie chart gives information about the ages of these course participants.

Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Nowadays, many people attend
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evening courses at an adult education centre.
According to
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chart, 42% of the participants were over 50 years old, 26% were between 40 to 49, 16% were between 30 to 39, 11% were between 20 to 29,
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5% were aged under 20. The
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people
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the higher
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of taking
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, but most of them do not want to participate
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.
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, most of the men want to attend painting
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. Compare the
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differences between
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men
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and
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in the choice of
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courses
. Men like to join
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sculpture
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women
, but
women
are more motivated to attend language drama painting classes than men.
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