The bar chart below shows the numbers of men and women attending various evening courses at an adult education centre in the year 2009. The pie chart gives information about the ages of these course participants. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words women with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
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