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The diagram below shows the varius stages involving in publishing the book

The diagram below shows the varius stages involving in publishing the book
The diagram below illustrates why publishing a
book
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 takes approximately 18 to 24 months by some steps.
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, as can been
see
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 by the process, there are 9 stages of producing the
book
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, beginning with writing and ending with
distribution
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 the
book
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 to bookshops. After writing was written, it was sent to publishing houses by letter. Before the contract was made with the publishing house, writing was studied by editors. Why
do
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 writing studied by editors? In order to avoid some grammar or spelling mistakes that can be in the writing. After that,
writing
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the writing
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 designed by layout was checked and
also
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 giving the final decision on their work. In the next step , after all
checking
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 steps, the writing is printed. Having been printed, the writing
are
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then
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binded
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 to the
book
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. The
last
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 stage of involving the
book
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,
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 is distributing the
book
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 to the bookshops.

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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words book with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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