The table below illustrates weekly consumption by age group of dairy products in a European country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table shown depicts the dairy products consumed weakly by each
age
range in a country in Europe. It consists of Milk
and Butter
in low and full fat.
Overall
, it is readily apparent that low-fat milk
and butter
are digested more than full-fat
in all age
groups. However
, full-fat
butter
is more common in all ages than full-fat
milk
. Although
, low-fat is more popular than low-fat butter
in all age
categories.
in terms of milk
, as age
increases the consumption of milk
rises as well. People less than the age
of 25 drink more full-fat
milk
than the other ages (59%) In addition
, between 26-45 individuals tend to drink less full-fat
milk
at 20% following, Ages 45-65 and 65+ drink at 45% and 30% respectively. In comparison, between 26-45, low-fat milk
is drunk more frequently at 80% and 65+ at 70%. As well as
the 45-65 category consumes more (55%) than civilians below 25 (41%).
On the other hand
, full-fat
butter
is eaten the most below the age
of 25 (60%) following, 50% in between age
45-65 or 65+ (49%). And the lowest percentage of full-fat
ingested at 38% at 26-45. Compared to low-fat butter
, most is consumed at the age
of 26-45 subsequently
, 45-65 and 65+ have a percentage of 50% and 51% respectively. Finally
, the least amount of low-fat butter
eaten is 40% at age
25 and below.Submitted by amnahazfar03 on
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