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The table below illustrates weekly consumption by age group of dairy products in a European country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below illustrates weekly consumption by age group of dairy products in a European country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table shown depicts the dairy products consumed weakly by each
age
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 range in a country in Europe. It consists of
Milk
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 and
Butter
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 in low and full fat.
Overall
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, it is readily apparent that low-fat
milk
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 and
butter
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 are digested more than
full-fat
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 in all
age
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 groups.
However
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,
full-fat
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butter
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 is more common in all ages than
full-fat
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milk
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.
Although
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, low-fat is more popular than low-fat
butter
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 in all
age
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 categories. in terms of
milk
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, as
age
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 increases the consumption of
milk
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 rises as well. People less than the
age
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 of 25 drink more
full-fat
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milk
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 than the other ages (59%)
In addition
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, between 26-45 individuals tend to drink less
full-fat
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milk
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 at 20% following, Ages 45-65 and 65+ drink at 45% and 30% respectively. In comparison, between 26-45, low-fat
milk
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 is drunk more frequently at 80% and 65+ at 70%.
As well as
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 the 45-65 category consumes more (55%) than civilians below 25 (41%).
On the other hand
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,
full-fat
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butter
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 is eaten the most below the
age
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 of 25 (60%) following, 50% in between
age
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 45-65 or 65+ (49%). And the lowest percentage of
full-fat
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 ingested at 38% at 26-45. Compared to low-fat
butter
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, most is consumed at the
age
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 of 26-45
subsequently
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, 45-65 and 65+ have a percentage of 50% and 51% respectively.
Finally
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, the least amount of low-fat
butter
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 eaten is 40% at
age
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 25 and below.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words age, milk, butter, full-fat with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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