Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, many undergraduate
students
are willing to gain knowledge beyond their main Use synonyms
subjects
. Despite Use synonyms
this
, others say that it is more crucial for them to pay their all attention and Linking Words
time
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on
their own major. Change preposition
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This
has been a debatable case, Linking Words
however
, in my opinion, Linking Words
students
have Use synonyms
their
Change the word
the
rights
to explore and learn other Fix the agreement mistake
right
subjects
.
Primarily, focus on Use synonyms
learn
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learning
main
Correct article usage
the main
subjects
making the Use synonyms
students
get easily in-depth knowledge and understanding rather than learning various Use synonyms
subjects
at the same Use synonyms
time
. Use synonyms
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, Linking Words
an undergraduate
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undergraduate students
an undergraduate student
students
with specific Use synonyms
major
: law, doctoral, and psychology will learn only Fix the agreement mistake
majors
subjects
related to their courses, they have a minimum chance to explore more because they learn a specific field of knowledge. Use synonyms
Moreover
, once they graduate, they can easily become expert in the field that they focus Linking Words
to learn
. Change preposition
on learning
For example
, only a bachelor of law Linking Words
that
can become a lawyer and only a bachelor of psychology Correct pronoun usage
apply
that
can become a psychologist.
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apply
Nevertheless
, every student has their own right to choose what they want to learn. In my belief, as long as they can be responsible for their choice, it would be no issue if they want to explore beyond their main major. Responsible means the additional Linking Words
subjects
they choose to learn Use synonyms
does
not disturb their activities and class schedules. It Correct subject-verb agreement
do
is
Unnecessary verb
apply
also
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occurred
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occurs
to
other activities or Change preposition
in
extracurricular
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extracurriculars
which are
they are joining. Verb problem
that
For example
, joining organizations or competitions that are not related Linking Words
with
their study. Despite Change preposition
to
this
, it will Linking Words
also
benefit them in increasing their soft skills.
In conclusion, Linking Words
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I
am
not strictly Verb problem
do
defends
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defend
for
an opinion saying that undergraduate Change preposition
apply
students
are more important to give all their Use synonyms
time
and attention to study and are not allowed to learn other Use synonyms
subjects
. Use synonyms
However
, as long as they can manage their Linking Words
time
, it can be possible for them to take and learn other Use synonyms
subjects
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