The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates the UK unemployed time spent broken down by gender, part of the day, and type of
activity
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for the
last
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year period.
Overall
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the table provides information about 14
types
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of
activity
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, time frames when people prefer to do these
types
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of
activity
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, and the proportion by gender. The UK unemployed preferred to fulfil most part of their activities in the morning and leave less business for the
afternoon
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. There were some
types
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of activities that were more popular among
women
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.
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, housework and shopping. The most
men
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favorable
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types
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of
activity
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were job hunting and gardening. Unemployed
women
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in England preferred to start the day with housework (49%) and shopping (26%),
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some of them did these activities during the
afternoon
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, 21% and 17% respectively.
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,
women
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were occupied by visiting friends and towns more than
men
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. Unemployed
men
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in the UK did housework and shopping less actively than
women
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. They preferred to spend time on job hunting and gardening, 14% preferred to work in the garden in the morning and 13% during the
afternoon
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. Job search communication was more popular among
men
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than among
women
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, 10% of
women
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search for jobs in the morning and 17% during the
afternoon
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.
Men
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looked for jobs more actively in the morning (22%) than during the
afternoon
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(12%).
Men
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also
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read, watch TV, decorate, walk, do nothing, stay in bed, play sports, and drink more than
women
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words activity, types, afternoon, women, men with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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