The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the UK unemployed time spent broken down by gender, part of the day, and type of
activity
for the Use synonyms
last
year period.
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Overall
the table provides information about 14 Linking Words
types
of Use synonyms
activity
, time frames when people prefer to do these Use synonyms
types
of Use synonyms
activity
, and the proportion by gender. The UK unemployed preferred to fulfil most part of their activities in the morning and leave less business for the Use synonyms
afternoon
. There were some Use synonyms
types
of activities that were more popular among Use synonyms
women
. Use synonyms
For example
, housework and shopping. The most Linking Words
men
's Use synonyms
favorable
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favourable
types
of Use synonyms
activity
were job hunting and gardening.
Unemployed Use synonyms
women
in England preferred to start the day with housework (49%) and shopping (26%), Use synonyms
although
some of them did these activities during the Linking Words
afternoon
, 21% and 17% respectively. Use synonyms
Also
, Linking Words
women
were occupied by visiting friends and towns more than Use synonyms
men
.
Unemployed Use synonyms
men
in the UK did housework and shopping less actively than Use synonyms
women
. They preferred to spend time on job hunting and gardening, 14% preferred to work in the garden in the morning and 13% during the Use synonyms
afternoon
. Job search communication was more popular among Use synonyms
men
than among Use synonyms
women
, 10% of Use synonyms
women
search for jobs in the morning and 17% during the Use synonyms
afternoon
. Use synonyms
Men
looked for jobs more actively in the morning (22%) than during the Use synonyms
afternoon
(12%). Use synonyms
Men
Use synonyms
also
read, watch TV, decorate, walk, do nothing, stay in bed, play sports, and drink more than Linking Words
women
.Use synonyms
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